Do You Surmise?
Wild Child ~ Philip Brent Harris
I get so very few likes or comments.
I don’t know what I’m doing wrong.
I know I will sound weak if I lament;
Not for satire, opinion, short or long.
I realize all of my verses are not gems.
I am sure that some stink up the joint,
Still, I publish my own art with them.
If no one see them, what is the point?
Tell me, am I that bad; I need to know.
Should I leave the net-map for good?
I’ll admit that this makes me feel low.
What’re thoughts; kill or lift my mood.
If you like, feel my work has promise.
Critique it, constructive or otherwise.
When I hear nothing; it feels like a diss
Am I overly sensitive, do you surmise?
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